Well, if Egan doesn't like it, I am happy to take the PDF down, just as I am with all documents I host. (If Egan hadn't pre-emptively blocked me on Twitter without us ever having interacted, he could have simply DMed me, but a comment here or an email would also work fine.)
As for crediting by name: the formatting is as in the original, and I am not responsible for that; I am responsible for the URL and PDF metadata, both of which credit Greg Egan (as I put a lot of work in setting correct PDF metadata in general to be a good citizen).
I think you are letting your self-interest cloud your view of the situation here, since it is very simple. It is not Greg Egan's job to chase after every person who distributes his work online and ask them to take it down. It is your job, as the would-be publisher, to contact him and obtain permission beforehand.
This is not just what the law requires, it is what ethics and good manners call for. I believe you understand this.
Update: Egan confirms that this site is distributing his story without permission.
As for crediting by name: the formatting is as in the original, and I am not responsible for that; I am responsible for the URL and PDF metadata, both of which credit Greg Egan (as I put a lot of work in setting correct PDF metadata in general to be a good citizen).
This is not just what the law requires, it is what ethics and good manners call for. I believe you understand this.
https://www.gregegan.net/MISC/CLOSER/Closer.html
My personal favourite on there is Oceanic. I really should get around to reading some of his books, but they are pretty intense bedtime reading!